Summer's Song
01 August, 2007
The smells of summer:
Fresh-cut grass and hose water,
Sun tea and hot dogs.
from the imagination of Anonymous @ 1:30 PM,
4 Thoughts:
- At 10:51 PM CDT, Lisa wrote...
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The sights of summer:
fresh cut farts and trouser-hose,
pool pee and turd logs
(Gee, Jacob. I feel kind of bad. Your haiku is so sweet, so melodic, then I go and mess it all up with a lame poop-poem. Sorry. Please feel free to defile my haikus.) - At 10:11 AM CDT, wrote...
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You poo'd all over my song. :(
- At 12:57 PM CDT, wrote...
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The snow in July:
Seriously clashes with
the forest fires - At 8:44 PM CDT, wrote...
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I like that you added "hose water." I always like taking a sip of cold water from the hose after I've been working in the yard. Besides cooling me off, it reminds me of the same childhood experience.